Rough copy of opinion
I think that hiding a dragon is very tough especially if your Eragon because sometimes hiding things are hard when people don't know what your up to.
another reason is it would be very tough because if it is too big it would be hard to hide. finally Once you hide something you might feel guilty or you act suspicious. These are some of the reason why you shouldn't hide a dragon.
another reason is it would be very tough because if it is too big it would be hard to hide. finally Once you hide something you might feel guilty or you act suspicious. These are some of the reason why you shouldn't hide a dragon.
- Hiding the dragon is not a great idea especially if he is huge or makes loud noises.
- Once you hide something away you might feel guilty or you act suspicious
Draft setting
Carvahall has a desert located in the middle called a Hadarac desert it has some sandunes and it's very warm .Down by the south there are the boer mountains and in it there is a mountain or a volcano called the Farthen Dur the mountains are huge compared to the other ones.
Up in the north there is a forest and that is called the Du weldenvarden forest, that little part in the forest there was a mountain and it was called the ellesmera.Up in the north there are more mountains and they are daret they are very spiky and near it their are the spine.
The coastal mountains are in the north near Dras-leona, and next to it is uru baen and it is also part of the desert. Over to the east there is a stream called Teirm
In the north there is a small island located on the ocean and that is called vroengard , it has some green to it because it might have some grass or trees to it. Most of these mountains look very sharp except for the desert, Overall i think Alagaesia is a very big place with oceans and seas that really connects the land.
Carvahall has a desert located in the middle called a Hadarac desert it has some sandunes and it's very warm .Down by the south there are the boer mountains and in it there is a mountain or a volcano called the Farthen Dur the mountains are huge compared to the other ones.
Up in the north there is a forest and that is called the Du weldenvarden forest, that little part in the forest there was a mountain and it was called the ellesmera.Up in the north there are more mountains and they are daret they are very spiky and near it their are the spine.
The coastal mountains are in the north near Dras-leona, and next to it is uru baen and it is also part of the desert. Over to the east there is a stream called Teirm
In the north there is a small island located on the ocean and that is called vroengard , it has some green to it because it might have some grass or trees to it. Most of these mountains look very sharp except for the desert, Overall i think Alagaesia is a very big place with oceans and seas that really connects the land.
Galbatorix summary Draft
- 10 years old
-showed promise
-tested by riders and passed
-some feared his skills, exceeded others.
-thought he was dangerous
-they were ambushed
-only Galbatorix survived with serious wounds,but his dragon was
'then were the seeds of madness planted.'
-Galbatorix found an ally
-together they killed an elder
-Galbatorix turned on his ally and killed him
-The riders found him and galbatorix fled away
-He hid in the wastlelands until the stopped looking for him
-he met a young rider name morzan
-Galbatorix convnced him to leave the gate
-G entered and stole a dragon
-showed promise
-tested by riders and passed
-some feared his skills, exceeded others.
-thought he was dangerous
-they were ambushed
-only Galbatorix survived with serious wounds,but his dragon was
'then were the seeds of madness planted.'
-Galbatorix found an ally
-together they killed an elder
-Galbatorix turned on his ally and killed him
-The riders found him and galbatorix fled away
-He hid in the wastlelands until the stopped looking for him
-he met a young rider name morzan
-Galbatorix convnced him to leave the gate
-G entered and stole a dragon